My River Water

Help me friend, I have lost touch with my geography.  The radio host liken something to the youthfulness to a river where the strength is in the early stages but after a while it dies down. In fact he said that at the source the river is strongest. I seem to have confusion here since I recall that the river may be comparative calm the closer to the source. 
 

My River Water

 

My source is a powerful waterfall

Yesterday a mere drip but today not at all

 

Rushing waters beat and dug deep into my bed

I find children play in my calm pool like shed

Very lower down miles away

Every rock or obstruction meet grave dismay

Removed by the strength I built up on my way down

 

Water so rapid no bathers will be found

And so please don’t be fooled by my lengthy course

The stronger I can get the farther from my source

Everyone soon learns from a visit my friend

River waters can get very rapid when nearing the end

 

 

 

 

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  • 2 Sep 2010, 10:48 AM A Reader wrote:
    The source of the river can be easy flowing or it can rough, it all depends on what the source is, the trajectory of the river and the landscape which the rivers runs through. But the flow capacity is what qualitifes it to be a river having a source and a mouth. So you are not off in your thinking, the circumstances dictate the flow.
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