Your Birthday

Her mother celebrates her birthday today and they are taking her away from home where she wouldn’t feel tempted to keep going. She has that tendency but today she will be away from it all and hopefully able to enjoy the Birthday. The following double acrostic is for her with a hope that they all enjoy the celebrations

Your Birthday

You do mostly the same things every day and night

Once out in the back you start your plight

Undo wrongs the wind, the rain and time do

Remember how you cared for us like this too?

By you attending to our early needs

It is like how you meticulously pull the weeds

Reaching up and taking fruit or leaves from the trees

Takes me to days you pruned us for later ease 

Harmonies in the choir is like us living with uniformity

Doing good for each and living righteously

And so today with no work to compel what you do

Your Birthday on the Bathsheba Park is we saying we love you

Happy Birthday

To:Mommy with Love

From: The Children and Theirs

Children

Grandchildren

Deveda

Veldeane

Grantley

Wynell

Ainsley

Jason

Cherie

Nicholas

Christopher

Monique

Jenna

Voshon


Same poem different acrostic Highlighted


Your Birthday

Doretha Deane

You Do mostly the same things every day and night

Once out in the back you start your plight

Undo wrongs the wind, the rain and time do

Remember how you cared for us like this too?

By you attending to our early needs

It  is  like  how you meticulously pull the weeds

Reaching up and taking fruit or leaves from the trees

Takes me to Days you pruned us for later ease 

Harmonies in the choir is like us living with uniformity

Doing good for each and living righteously

And so today with no work to compel what you do

Your Birthday  at  the Bathsheba Park is we saying we love you

Your Special Card

 

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