Preserving Good Calypso

I heard the host of Fireworks saying that it is futile to attempt to rhyme ever line in Calypso. This he believes only serves to lose the essence of the message and the focus turns to the rhyme scheme.

I will agree only as far as this includes the new writers who haven’t perfected the art form but as for the old writers, they are true greats. Some of them work their words so crafty that there is an inside line rhyme too. They managed to get their messages across and wrote some classics that perpetuated our culture. I remember waiting to hear what we emerge from the tents every year to address the economical and social unrest in our nation.. We can learn much from these Calypsos and I look forward to doing so.

If I can scribe this little verse below in 10 minutes, keeping rhyme scheme while at the same time preserving the title down the left spine and the overall message then I know these craftier gurus can achieve much more over the year between tents.

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Preserving Good Calypso

 

Finding ourselves dealing in things we can solve

Is what the King wants us to resolve

Rather than dealing with things we don’t know

Entangled melodies in corrupt Calypso

Written by these authors of little repute

On a culture already marred with dispute.

Reactions of our diverse community

Keeps ringing out one vital thing to me

Sing again like the songs of past greats

With social commentary woven in ambiguous lyrics

I am tickled with the cunning of words in verse

The songs well written and diligently reherse’

Honors go out to the old monarchs and the Big Show

Delivering genuine, traditional, quality Calypso

Everyone resolute this dying art to protect

Never allowing our people to ever forget

Nationhood is preserved in what Calypsonians say

In their rhythmic meandering of words in play

Such craftsmen of our Nation’s fate

     Must scribe their songs with expectations great

 

 

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